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UnknownToTheKnown

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The delay and over decay and reverb really bugged me throughout the piece. For a sad piano song it seems to lack harmonically in places. Especially at the beginning. I felt you didn't make use of the wide range of chords possible on the piano. For example, a few minor 9ths or 6ths would have helped the sad overtone. Even minor suspensions that could descend into a major suspension, similar to Pergolesi's Stabat Mater dolorosa. Listen to that for some great harmony. Around 2:32 where it gets bassy and loud represents anger more than sadness. And then you seemed to repeat it again with minor variations to the sequence. Could have just left it at 3 minutes. 6:21 is a good example of your descending suspension, even though it was the result of the delay effect. Not the same thing. Overall, not terrible - but i certainly didn't feel sad listening to it. I look forward to your next one!

Liked the deep vocal effects at the beginning and the sweet chiming melody that compliments it adds a great atmosphere to the track. Wasn't sure about the percussion though. For a track with intense atmospheric effects i just thought the percussion could have been messed around with more. A bit of bitcrusher on your kick and stuttering on other parts? Overall i enjoyed it though.

A bit of distortion at the beginning in your low end. Unless that's the sound you were after. The percussion is a bit basic, especially your crash. I'm not really feeling the melody either. Overall a bit of development would have been enjoyable. However i liked the chip tune bit at the end, was unexpected.

Thefur responds:

The whole process took up only 2 hours in total, so I'm not surprised that it can actually be better! But still, it should be called a Gabba Hardcore then... but still needs more clue on where they should go to cause... I'm still learning up till now!

But still, thanks for review!

Would have loved a bit of convolution reverb on the base that comes in around 1:15. Would have blended great with the mix. The sawtoothish synth you have going on is catchy. Just a bit too repetitive for me.

TastyTeo responds:

I know that feel :D could have worked more on it but boredom took over once again

The first two chords in the progression are great. The last 2 ruin the entire progression though. I quiet like the beat. Expand your sounds though. Don't just use the plugins that come with FL Studio - unless you can make the sounds your after with them.

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